July 4, 2004
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Sitting Beside a Dying Fire
Sitting beside a dying fire
Glowing embers in the night
Cooling evening air surrounds
A figure huddled in his thoughts
Tranquil is the nearby river
Turbulent the inner man
Peaceful breeze through yonder trees
Might fan the flames inside
However he might try today
To cast his troubles far away
This untamed and simple place
Can only pacify a scornful hunger
Seeking peace in a reclusive nature
Contains the trouble like the storm
Fury released in a blinding flash
Thunderous booming crash
The world goes on its merry way
Nature ebbs and flows and seasons
Change upon another’s whim
Another day fades into night’s obscurity
But this struggle is woven through him
As a dripping cloak he wears indignantly
Praising his self-righteous sacrifice
Unaware of the burden that he bares
Visions of the shifting stars
He cannot see beneath his load
The constellations tell his fortune
But these wonders he can’t feel
The man stares into the dying fire
His features flicker in the flames
The fire snaps, “cast off your burden
We shall both be free again tonight”
As the cloak falls into flames
It carries scars of life’s lost battles
Leaving tired eyes to wonder at
Dawn emerging through the dewy haze
Comments (1)
You have done quite well it seems …from this poem to present day
I still feel mirred in mud at times…
but some days are so clear…
I know I need to work on sorting and thought process….
I am just leafing thru your world here Luv…nevermind me ramblings…lol
and no responce is necessary
((((hugs))))
Dorothea