July 4, 2004

  • Sitting Beside a Dying Fire


     








    Sitting beside a dying fire


    Glowing embers in the night


    Cooling evening air surrounds


    A figure huddled in his thoughts


     


    Tranquil is the nearby river


    Turbulent the inner man


    Peaceful breeze through yonder trees


    Might fan the flames inside


     


    However he might try today


    To cast his troubles far away


    This untamed and simple place


    Can only pacify a scornful hunger


     


    Seeking peace in a reclusive nature


    Contains the trouble like the storm


    Fury released in a blinding flash


    Thunderous booming crash


     


    The world goes on its merry way


    Nature ebbs and flows and seasons


    Change upon another’s whim


    Another day fades into night’s obscurity


     


    But this struggle is woven through him


    As a dripping cloak he wears indignantly


    Praising his self-righteous sacrifice


    Unaware of the burden that he bares


     


    Visions of the shifting stars


    He cannot see beneath his load


    The constellations tell his fortune


    But these wonders he can’t feel


     


    The man stares into the dying fire


    His features flicker in the flames


    The fire snaps, “cast off your burden


    We shall both be free again tonight”


     


    As the cloak falls into flames


    It carries scars of life’s lost battles


    Leaving tired eyes to wonder at


    Dawn emerging through the dewy haze


     


     

Comments (1)

  • You have done quite well it seems …from this poem to present day
    I still feel mirred in mud at times…
    but some days are so clear…
    I know I need to work on sorting and thought process….
    I am just leafing thru your world here Luv…nevermind me ramblings…lol
    and no responce is necessary
    ((((hugs))))
    Dorothea

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