October 9, 2004

  • Where Did It All Go Wrong?


     


    You wanted to leave


    I could not make you stay


    You’d made up your mind


    All the talking was done


     


    So early one morning


    I helped you pack up your car


    Checked all the tires


    And topped of the oil


     


    You gave me a hug


    And you kissed me goodbye


    And I watched as your car


    Rolled down the long gravel drive


     


    In the blink of an eye


    You were gone from my life


    In the blink of an eye


    You were gone


     


    Now you are miles and a lifetime away


    And the years have faded the memories


    But sometimes I see an old picture of you


    And I wonder, ‘cause its all I have left of you


     


    Where did you go?


    Where are you now?


    Why did you run so fast?


    You never even let me try?


    How come you left all your pictures behind?


    How come your dreams never included me?


    Did you want to forget me?


    Did you just want to leave it all behind?


     


    Where did it all go wrong?


     


    Am I the only one who believed


    In the words that the preacher said?


    Am I the only one who believed


    That we ever had any chance at all?


     


    Where did you go?


    Where are you now?


    Why did you run so fast?


    Why couldn’t I even try?


    How come you left all your pictures behind?


    How come your dreams never included me?


    Did you want to forget me?


    Did you just want to leave it all behind?


     


    Where did it all go wrong?


     

Comments (5)

  • hi.

    well, as far as I’m concerned, you don’t seem to have any problems with lyrics.  It reads well, especially knowing ahead of time that it’s going to be a song.  What type of music to go along? 

    I can hear an acoustic guitar, maybe a harp.  Of course I always hear those, I’m a bit dylan-influenced.

    Reads great though.

    ~lisa

  • well written…

  • Ah, come on. Post the poem you wrote:)

  • Always we have so many unaswered questions.  I believe it was Seneca who said that time heals what reason cannot.  Good job.

  • “How come your dreams never included me?”

    this one line made the poem for me
    I quit here …I am so close to tears right now
    you write so beautiful!

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