November 4, 2004

  • The Chalice and the Blood


     








    The chalice sits


    Its contents full


    The blood of Christ


    Is black within


    It speaks to me


    Of forgiven sin


    From deep inside


    The fortress doors


    And heavy stone


    Glass as stained


    As the life it hides


    From the house of God


    It calls to me


    Says take my terms


    And be like me


    Heed these words


    I preach to thee


    Now on your knees


    It’s pray or die


    And never forget


    Its time to tithe


    Accept my love


    Conditionally


    Drink from my cup


    Given for thee


    Confirmed by our


    Conformity


    The body lies


    In the roadside dust


    Blood pooled and dried


    Blackened or rust


    It speaks to me


    Of forgiven sin


    Of torture and demise


    Undeserved


    Unmerciful


    An act stained


    With a preachers lies


    From a house of God


    The message came


    This one is different


    That one in not the same


    Heed these words


    I preach to thee


    Heathens and pagans


    The devils lot


    Inhuman in His eyes


    Purify and sanctify


    Accept my love


    Conditionally


    Drink form my cup


    Given for thee


    Burn all those not blessed


    By our conformity


     

Comments (2)

  • OMG…I love this…this is what I need this day
    for me the last couple days have been utter torture…but my migrane has all but left and I can sit and read once more.
    It does not strike me as morbid…but as hope
    coming from confusion
    Dorothea

  • I really need to think on this one.  It’s like my “Cup” poem in that I get so many things out of it that I’m not sure what the coherent message is.  That is not a criticism, it means it reaches me on many different levels and to me, that’s what makes a poem exciting.  It makes me want to read it over a few times and see how it makes me feel each time……sometimes I get a positive message from this piece and other times it’s kind of disturbing because I sense it’s really about everything I disdain about organized religion such as the promise of redemption if I follow their rituals. 
    So, I’m curious, what’s your intended message?

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